23450's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ball Room Hard Mode.]

Im tired of it.

You really need to make your own games. If your looking through a tutorial, learn from it and make your own games. Dont just copy and paste the script from the tutorial and claim it all as your own. I have seen this one and many others just like it all around newgrounds. Ping Pong Practise. That is another flash that i reviewed. It is identical to yours. In just about every way. Even the score board is the same. Dont submit things like this ever again. Come up with your own ideas and your own games. And you could have easily put hard mode and easy mode in the same file. And check out Ping Pong Practise if you dont believe me.

[Ping Pong Practise]

YOU ARE NOT LEARNING FROM THIS!

You will not learn a thing by just copying and pasting AS from the tutorial you used into your flash. You have to create your own games by using some of the concepts. Make your own game and if there is something you dont know how to do ask someone or look into tutorials to find out how to do that one thing. Dont make an entire game from a tutorial and submit it.

FatonWheels responds:

actually i did not copy anything i wrote it....
but i guess its none of youre busines

[Move the ball V1.O]

great

this game is really addictive and i would have played for a long time only for it only had a few levels. i died once on the twirling cannon one. make another but actualy try on it.lol. more levels more sounds, music maybe, better graphics and you might have a good game going here. simple, but good.

[Tutorial & Short]

to easy

the thing that is so wrong with this is all the stuff you are trying to teach is just way to easy to do. if a complete noob were to look at this, the whole thing he would probably learn a few things, but those few things are stuff he could figure out on his own in a day or two. but i gave it an eight because i cant get enough that blow me away. lol.

High-Roller responds:

Mehh... Thanks for the review.

[Super Eddie]

alot of bugs

you have alot of little bugs to fix with this game but the game is actualy pretty damn good. the thing were he like glided through the air was a little wierd. is that what you had to do to make him jump so far?

[spaceDestroyers]

it did not work you shit head

The damn game did not work. I would have liked to play it a little more but the damn thing messed the hell up on me.