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[Throw It! (KB Game)]

Great job.

Great job with this. I might have to look into exacly what API is. I never did get the concept, but heard of it multiple times. Some sound would have been nice. But otherwise great game.

FLiXD responds:

It's basically drawing shapes with lines and curves, using AS, and filling them. So long as you understand co-ordinates and color hex codes, you'll be fine. Most of the stuff here was made using _root.createEmptyMovieClip, and then using WITH (MCName) to do the drawing. There really aren't that many API commands (<10?), so check out -liam-'s AS: API thread and have a play with it. Once you get into it, it's quite fun.

[Ping Pong Practise]

YOU ARE NOT LEARNING FROM THIS!

You will not learn a thing by just copying and pasting AS from the tutorial you used into your flash. You have to create your own games by using some of the concepts. Make your own game and if there is something you dont know how to do ask someone or look into tutorials to find out how to do that one thing. Dont make an entire game from a tutorial and submit it.

FatonWheels responds:

actually i did not copy anything i wrote it....
but i guess its none of youre busines

[Tutorial & Short]

to easy

the thing that is so wrong with this is all the stuff you are trying to teach is just way to easy to do. if a complete noob were to look at this, the whole thing he would probably learn a few things, but those few things are stuff he could figure out on his own in a day or two. but i gave it an eight because i cant get enough that blow me away. lol.

High-Roller responds:

Mehh... Thanks for the review.