23450's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[From Life to Death]

Nice style

Good and effective, for the most part. The art style fit well. Having each character coloured differently gave it a sense of individualism for each character, and properly seperated them throughout the story. What i didn't like is how you chose to draw most of it with a brush tool, but chose certain elements like the car and coffin to be drawn wit the pencil tool. Simply didn't do it for me.

But, if your going to make a flash that is basicly a slide show, it would have been nice to have some added detail. Character models were well done, but more thought put into the backgrounds and maybe seperate fills for all the elements would have done nicely.

The story was an interesting one. Not so much the story itself, but the basic concept you were trying to achieve. I do beleive alot more could have been done with it though. Something a little more thought provoking, ironic, or simply sad. I would have liked this guys life to have been a little more interesting, to say the least. But the whole idea of it was an interesting one at least.

So, story needed some more strength behind it, music worked well, style worked well, and was overall and effective effort. Good job. Hope to see some more from ya.

ReklessCreati0n responds:

Thanks number man!

I'm glad you enjoyed it... Thanks for the review, and your vote.

[MS Paint 3D]

Origonal

Its either stolen...ot, much more likely, old. Mainly because the size limit is 10 megs, not 5.

Anyway, with that outa the way, it was a very interesting watch. Very neat idea. Not that its probable in any way, but ofcourse its not meant to be.

Anyway, good job, but i was disapointed in the ending, as it could have whent on alot longer if you had gone to the 10 meg limit instead.

Monkeycraft responds:

When I submitted my last game it was 5megs, I just assumed it was the same.

[360 - Console Wars]

Very good.

Very entertaining i would have to say. I enjoyed watching this very much. Needed some kind of console blood though. And spartan shields are round, so maybe you should have used to Gears disk for the shield instead. And...yah, this owns. well done. Should have probably given credit to the movie and to the song being done by Nine Inch Nails.

Black-Fox5 responds:

Right, I forgot that. But, most people should've figured it out. =D
Thank you for taking your time.

[Vermillion]

Great job

Well, when i seen the name Vermillion, i had to watch it, to see how it measured up against my Vermillion pt.2 music video. And i have to say, yours blew mine right out of the water. Your story had a sense of randomness at the beginning, but everything started to fall together near the end. The artwork was not amazing, but it was well done and deserves some praise for sure. There was not alot of animation, mostly tweens and some liquid type animation, but the quality of the artwork makes up for things like that. The style of the song fit the style and story perfecly. right on the nose.

One thing. my eyes were hurting some bad after watching it. Changing from a dark scene to that white static was straining on the eyes. While i enjoyed it for the first 30 seconds, it became a nuisence (spelling?) afterwards.

greasygemo responds:

thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it! I'm sure as my understanding of flash improves my animations will get much stonger. But im glad you enjoyed it!

[Almost Home]

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aside from arfenhouse, thats got to be the most random shit i have ever seen. lol. well done.

ConAir responds:

Noted.

[Where I belong]

Great animation man

Jesus man. How the fuck does this not have a higher score? it really does deserve more. Animation wise that is.

The only thing i can see bringing this way way down is the story. It seems very dull and generic. You really have to work on writting a little bit more. Take a look at my submission provincial Practice. In comparison to this, the animation is complete shit. But with the storyline it had, it has a score just about up to this.

Backgrounds could also some work as well. While they look fine and do not really take away from it all, it would really help if they were more detailed and well drawn. people should be able to look at a background without the character and still think it looks good. In this case, when i concentrated on the character, the background did not bother me. But if i looked behind the character and really took a look at it all, they were fairly simple and...not bad, just not relitively good.

Overall, very fucking well done sir. I loved the character, drawn very well in all the scenes. So story and backgrounds and you have yourself a 4+ flash i believe.

Ginga-densetsu-killa responds:

Heh, thanks, The reason behind the storyline is that i wanted it to be a short animation not one one drags on.

[TANKMEN]

Great Movie Man

You did a very good job with this. Voice acting was great, animation was smooth, humour was slikghtly dry, but i loved it none the less. One thing that suprised me about you, is that your actually responding to reviews. Submissions in the top 50 dont get very many responses, due to the large amount of reviews. I respect you for taking the time to read them. And yah, great job. Look forward to others you have to release.

JohnnyUtah responds:

thanks, appreciate it dude

[Pickleman's Breakfast]

Very good.

I found this very entertaining. Graphics were amazing and animation was smooth. One beef i have with it is that i dont really like this "Pickleman" character. He weas pretty stupid, pointless, and overall unapealing. Also, how exacly did he win? i dont understand why the thing just started turnign into green....glass i geuss you could say. But, apart from plotholes and an lame main character, this was very well done and makes up for anything else wrong with it. Song was very fitting as well.

poxpower responds:

He wins because the pickle juice from his pickle reacts with the oatmeal and makes it solid.
GO STUDY CHEMISTRY, JERK. It works.

Anyways, sorry you have pickleman. Maybe you should read the comics to see what he's actualy all about.

[Beyond Gaming RPG edition]

Cant post

i cant post on the thread. Put Mouse.hide() to make the mouse visiable. is invisible. Because it is invisable the whole thing. And the game is fucked. Space is attack. And space makes you go back to menu. The game is usless. we did not think about that. shit. im screwed. lol. im gonna get blamed for all of this. shoulda tested more man. gotta do that with games.

Xionico responds:

mmmh...ill see i i can fix that, both the mouse and the game,

p.s. i made it so the guy can attack with shift, there are the instructions abouve the game

[Theatre Previews]

Pokemon is poop.

So you submitted this because you did not get co-author on a movie? Who care if you did not get co-author.

I dont like bloopers that are animated either. They are not really bloopers. Bloopers are not bloopers if they are planned.

I so hit the refresh button like 700 times and got you to 1000 veiws. NOW THANK ME?...............i should go to bed shouldn't I?

swiftstylerX responds:

Yes, you should go to bed, sleep is good :D